literature

words trump action

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When I'm wheelchair bound,
you can bet you'll be around
'Cause I don't have to shout
to drown out my actions

I never need to use my touch,
just a still whispering hush
Echoes in our connected eyes
although we're frozen in time.

Motion to typed text in haste,
those heavy footsteps have a space.
Our library's always cramped,
but there's no house for the mimes.

Words open your mouth in awe.
Fights dislocate your jaw.
But you know words can break
what a punch never could.

Further respect laden silence,
than epitomes of violence.
Bloody misunderstandings what we're left with
when we refused to end the quiet.

So when I'm wheelchair bound,
you can be you'll be around
'Cause I don't have to shout
to drown out my actions.
tried experimenting with rhymes. i dont use them much, simply b/c im bad at it, but i like how this one turned out...

ALSO!!!! tried using punctuation! its not that im bad at it, im actually quite good at English, ive just never used them in a poem before.....

Comments please! especially if i screwed up on anything...
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